给英国学校邮件开头写什么?

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这个嘛,我其实没太多经验。 不过之前申请学校的时候发过几封email给admission department(不知道你们申请的时候需不需要写ps)。

那个时候因为需要尽快知道结果,所以email的发件心情还是比较急切的(=°Д°) 所以我记得是这样写的—— Dear xxx, Thank you for your time and effort. I am writing to ask if you have finished examining my application form, personal statement and transcript. Also, is there any further documents that are required before we can make a final decision on my admission? Thanks very much! Best wishes, PS:如果学校回复说需要补充材料的话,记得再补充一次材料发过去!

但是,如果你们不需要尽快知道结果的话(比如申请季已经过去了,或者你已经有目标学校了只要等着他们来通知你就行),那么可以写得轻松随意一点—— Dear xxx, This is Peter from 中国留学中介XXX. We acted for Mr.X in his applications to your University (course name). He will be sending his final offer letter shortly;at the same time, he would like to know more about the scholarship that he can get once he is enrolled into your university. Could you please send us details of possible scholarships that might be available to him, along with criteria and how to apply? Kind regards, Peter PS:如果觉得对方可能感兴趣的话,可以在结尾加上一句 – Look forward to hearing from you soon!

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I am writing to you on behalf of.... 这句话的“你”可大可小,可以是你所在的院校院长(院长们都很忙的哦),也可以是系里面比较和蔼可亲的教师或导师;当然也可以是你的朋友、同学或者校友在申请签证时遇到难题给你写一封中等长度的解答信(这封信是英国移民局认可的哦!而且比你的CV更有作用呢!) 但是切记一点:要使用英文! 用中文沟通是非常不妥当的哟~ 你知道为什么中国学生总让老外对中国人的中文水平感到震惊吗?因为中国人不会用英文跟外国人交流呀~ 在这个全球化趋势的大环境里还是不要做让自己后悔的事情啦~ 希望对你有帮助!加油!祝你成功!

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